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February 17
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*BSJ's POV*

               I punched the wall...

I was pissed!So fucking pissed!

  I pulled my fist out of the wall I just punched and looked at the hall.

We saw the two nurses.....Monie and Livi.

"Oh my!BSJ what did you do to the wall!?"Livi said as she pointed to the hole in the wall.

"Jesus!Keep it peaceful bro!"Monie yelled at me while flailing her arms around in the air.

  I just looked at the floor,and Anna just walked over to them.

"Ummmm.We lost Dawn,we don't know were she is...Kyle and Maroon were badly hurt.But BSJ and I are fine."

Both Monie and Livi looked terrified.

"Go check on Maroon and Kyle please,there the ones who got hurt..."Anna gestured to the door.

Monie and Livi just nodded and walked into the room.


"Aww!There so cute!"Monie screamed.

"Yes they are really cute~!"

Anna and I walked into the room.

Anna smiled,and I just face palmed......

   There on Kyle's bed was Maroon in Kyle's lap,sleeping and Kyle holding her.

I walked out of the room and banged my head against the wall.

Anna came out of the room with Livi and Monie clinging to her shoulders looking and gushing  at pics of Kyle and Maroon.

I only felt weird that everybody could be so happy when we have no idea were Dawn and Lex are and they could be anywhere doing anything...For all I know Lex could be killing Dawn right now...

   Plus...Kyle had to go through the intense Father to the boy-who's-dating-my-daughter-talk....

I couldn't take all of this.....I was one person and I couldn't take seeing all this blood and dieing...and then have tea the next day...

 
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:iconguitargod58:
Not bad. I see you got you're friends as new. Characters as well. I would say use the next part to develop their characters a bit. The action has hit a low so use the new characters as like a filler to give some relief to the story. But good part over all.
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~Anime911OwO Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah I wanted to give a teaser so you readers would see where the new pons in this game of chess go~!
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:iconguitargod58:
Yeah. Its a good idea. Are they meisters or weapons?
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~Anime911OwO Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Livi = Miester,Monie = Weapon~
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:iconguitargod58:
I'm guessing theyre partners. And what kind of weapon is Monie?
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~Anime911OwO Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Monie is basically like the tetsiga from Inyuwasha.And yes since they're best friends they are partners.
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:iconguitargod58:
Had a feeling. Well good luck with the next part. Cant wait.
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~Anime911OwO Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I bet you can't~!
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